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閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。   TheMeredithfami...

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    The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

    Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.

    One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy - his name was Bernard - had interested her very much.

    "I wish you could see him," she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. "He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don't see what he can do."

    After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. "I wish we could help him to earn money," said Clara. "His family is suffering so much."

    "So do I," said Harry. "We really should do something to assist them."

    For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, "I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成)."

    The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. "I tell you what we can do," said John. "You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花),and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.''

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    1. 續寫詞數應為150左右;

    2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

    When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

     With everything ready. Bernard started out on his new business.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

Paragraph 1:

    When Mrs. Meredith heard of John's idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Very soon, the children learnt how to pop the corn and then were busy in doing this "big" thing. At the same time, their mother went out to buy the paper bags that they needed. When she came back, she brought with her Rernard. Bernard felt grateful to all of them for what they had done for him.

Paragraph 2:

    With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Much sooner than could be expected, he returned with an empty basket and so much money that he had never seen before. He was so delighted that he could hardly speak, but his bright smiling face spoke for him. For many weeks, every Saturday, the three children would prepare popcorn for Bernard to sell. This little boy therefore could help support his family. All of this was because of John's bright idea.

解析:

【寫作思路】本文主要講述的是三個孩子在媽媽告訴他們一個貧困家庭的故事後,想出一個絕妙的主意——製作並售賣爆米花——幫助來自這個家庭的小孩Bernard掙錢養家的故事。所給的開頭合情合理,對續寫很有指導*,有利於考生髮揮想象補充完整這個故事。

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