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(2020·山東全國統一考試模擬卷)閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。...

(2020·山東全國統一考試模擬卷)閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。

Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray (流浪) dog, until he came to me.

I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.

It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.

There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.

It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?

I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.

The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us?” I questioned my mom.

Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea But my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.

Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.

Oneday, Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg.  

Almostayearlater, onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly. 

【回答】

【寫作指導】 本文是一篇記敍文。作者生動描述了他當時收留一隻流浪*的情形,這隻小*與家人相處融洽,非常討人喜歡。然而,事情並非天遂人願。一天,Spotty 斷了一條腿回到了家。續寫也由此展開。根據提示“One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.”抓住with a broken leg這幾個關鍵詞,充分發揮想象。接下來有兩種續寫思路:(1)可以專注續寫“腿斷”的原因;(2)可以重點續寫作者如何表示同情以及如何施救。第二段的提示語是“Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.”。barking breathlessly 意味着“在午夜發生了事故”,具體情況可以展開合理想象,加以描述。

【精*範文】

Oneday, Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg. I noticed that one of the dog's legs was bleeding. I immediately realized our Spotty was injured. I ran up to comfort him and tied a bandage around his injured leg, and then gave him some food to eat. I felt very sad. Spotty was still as cute as ever though he had a lame leg. After that, Spotty and I became more friendly. I really appreciated his courage.

Almostayearlater, onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly. I came out to see what had happened. Maybe there was a thief near our house. Maybe there was a robbery nearby. I didn't know. The next morning, we couldn't find our Spotty. I looked for him everywhere, but could find him nowhere. I cried and waited for him. But this time he was gone and never came back.

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