閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。Aligh...

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閲讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。

A light rain was falling as my sister Jill and I ran out of the shop, eager to get home and play with the presents that our parents had prepared for us and our baby sister, Sharon. Across the street from the shop was a gas station where the bus stopped., which was closed for New Year, but I saw a family standing outside the locked door, gathering closely together under the narrow overhang in an attempt to keep dry. I wondered briefly why they were there but then forgot about them as I raced to keep up with Jill.

Once we got home, there was barely time to enjoy our presents. We had to go off to our grandparents’ house for our annual family dinner. As we drove down the highway through town, I noticed that the family was still there, standing outside the closed gas station.

My father was driving very slowly down the highway. The closer we got to the turn-off for my grandparents’ house, the slower the car went. Suddenly, my father made a U-turn in the middle of the road and said that he couldn't stand it. "What?” asked my mother. " It's those people back there at the station, standing in the rain. They've got children. It's New Year. I can't stand it.”

When my father pulled in to the service station, I saw that there were five of them: the parents and three children-----two girls and a small boy, who were getting wet standing there. My father rolled down his window, “Happy New Year, " he said.

“Thanks. You, too,” the man replied. He was very tall and had to bend slightly to look into the car. Jill, Sharon, and I looked at the children, and they looked back at us.

​“Are you waiting for the bus?” my father asked. The man said that they were. They were going to Birmingham, where he had a brother and chances of a job. Knowing the bus wouldn't come along for several hours, my father invited them to our home to shelter from the rain.

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The man thought about it for a moment, but then refused. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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When we got out of the car at our house, the three children ran through the front door happily. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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One possible version:

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The man thought about it for a moment, but then refused. He said he didn't want to put us to any bother. My father explained that the rain would last long and our house was near the station. After my parents' strong persuasion, he finally agreed and thanked us all the time. They climbed into the car. They had no luggage,; only the clothes they were wearing. Once they settled in, my father looked back over his shoulder handing them some tissues to wipe the rainwater from their faces.

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When we got out of the car at our house, the three children ran through the front door happily. My mother noticed all their clothes were wet, so she found some of ours for them to change. Jill and I decided to share our New Year presents with the children. One of the girls chose Jill’s doll and immediately hugged it to her breast. When the rain stopped, my father drove them to the station. As we drove away, I watched out the window as long as I could, looking back at their happy faces. That was the day when Jill and I learned the joy of making others happy.

解析：【名師點評】文章開頭用並列句引出主題,簡單明瞭。

第二、三段分別用 To tell you the truth和 If you don' t mind引出內容,言語間充滿了真摯的感情。第三段用倒裝句 Only by communicating with others... difficulties收尾,在結構上使文章的精*之處得以昇華。此外,文章運用了大量的亮點詞語 (如be willing to, independent, instead of, overcome等)和高級句式 (如主語從句 that you are missing your parents and want to go home, 非限制*定語從句 which will improve your Chinese a lot,倒裝句 Only by communicating with others can you overcome your difficulties等)。

第二節

【短文大意】過新年那天,看到一家人冒雨在等車,作者的爸爸好心邀請他們到家中避雨。

【寫作指導】 Paragraph1的開頭是"這個男人想了一會,但是拒絕了",再結合第二段的開頭可知,最終他們答應了爸爸的邀請,故第一段應該主要描述作者一家人如何勸説那家人同意來家中避雨以及他們上車後的情形。

Paragraph2的開頭是“當我們到家下車時,三個孩子高興地從前門跑進去”, 顯然接下來的內容應該是描述他們來到家中,我們給予他們幫助,以及父親後來又開車將他們送回等車處的情形,還可以適當昇華一下主題,揭示“我”對這件事的感悟。

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