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閲讀下面短文,根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。TheWorldHealthOrganization,or...

閲讀下面短文,根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。

The World Health Organization, or WHO, estimates that more than 300,000 women die every year during pregnancy or childbirth. Each year, about 2.6 million babies are born dead and another 2.7 million babies die during the first 28 days of life, it said. Most of the deaths are taking place in South Asia and in Africa, south of the Sahara Desert.

Many of the deaths could have been avoided with quality health care, WHO officials said. Some stillbirths(births of dead babies), infant(new-born baby) deaths or deaths of mothers result from complications(併發症) during childbirth. Others may result from health problems with the mother. A poor diet or using drugs may also be to blame, the WHO added.

Another problem is that nearly all babies who are stillborn and half of all newborn deaths are never documented. Those deaths are not reported to or investigated by government health agencies. Traditions and beliefs often affect the collection of important records about infant deaths. In many countries, there is a belief that a stillbirth may not represent a lost life. Officials said this means the actual number of stillborn and newborn deaths is probably even higher than the WHO’s own current estimates. The United Nations agency says the lack of information makes it harder to find solutions. It is important for all births and deaths to be recorded so that health officials can make better decisions on how to prevent future deaths.

The WHO released three reports earlier this month to help health agencies do a better job collecting information.

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Among all the factors that influence health, lifestyle plays a dominant role. But many youngsters of today are leading unhealthy lifestyle, which has caused great damage to their health.

An unhealthy lifestyle is definitely one of the major contributors to many health issues. What is widely known is that various illnesses are associated with lack of exercise and an unhealthy diet. Besides, sleep deprivation can not only affect our memory but also our overall health. Worse still, an unhealthy lifestyle may predict a shorter lifespan.

From a well-being perspective, it's crucial that we should develop a unhealthy lifestyle. Exercise should be taken regularly to boost our immune system. Eating right is also a practical method of living healthily. In addition, too much stress poses a threat to our health, so we should learn to manage it. Most importantly, bear in mind that only with self-discipline can we build and maintain a healthy lifestyle.

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