閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。WhenSamfirstgottohisboardi...

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問題詳情:

閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.

He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.

He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.

[寫作內容]

1. 以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。

2. 以約120個詞講述一次你(或你的朋友)想家的經歷,內容包括:

⑴ 時間、地點和起因;

⑵ 想家給學習和生活帶來的影響;

⑶ 你(或你朋友)是如何應對的。

[寫作要求]

1.作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閲讀材料的內容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

[評分標準]

概括準確,語言規範,內容何時,語句連貫。

【回答】

【參考範文】讀寫任務:Version 1:

Sam, a student, was sent to a boarding school, in which he missed his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons. (31 words) 

    In fact, in real life, everyone must have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city. Right here, I would have to study in school for two years. Although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, I still felt homesick. At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there. And, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the lessons in the beginning. Besides, I was new for the students there. As a result, hardly did I have any close friends. Feeling terribly lonely, I couldn’t help thinking my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then.

    However, as days went on, I slowly adapted myself to the new environment. It was because I actively communicated with my new schoolmates and made friends with them that my homesickness gradually disappeared.(167 words)

【參考範文】讀寫任務:Version 2:

Sam was sent to a boarding school and tried to adapt himself to it but failed. Consequently he began to feel homesick and lonely and became reluctant with his study. (30 words)

Being homesick is not at all strange to anybody. In reality, I had a similar experience. In order to promote our competitive strength in exams, we were only allowed to go home once a month this term. It was the first time that I had had to stay in school for such a long time. So much did I miss my parents that on no account would I meet them without bursting into tears. It was this homesickness that had a bad effect on both my life and study. Missing my family so much, I did find it difficult to have a good meal and fall asleep. I could not concentrate on my閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。WhenSamfirstgottohisboardi... study and my study efficiency went down sharply. Worse still, totally lost in the great pressure from study, I didn’t know how to deal with it. 

I was about to abandon myself when my teachers gave me some advice on how to adapt to this busy school life. As a matter of fact, it was high time that I should study hard and independently. I then turned my homesickness into the motivation to study diligently. Moreover, I made more friends and frequently participated in outdoor activities, through which I was able to relax myself and share my feelings with others. Having seas of interesting things to do, I finally became accustomed to enjoying my school life.  

Tough as it was to adjust to a brand new school life, I succeeded eventually. The experience of overcoming the difficulties has now become a precious memory and a sum of wealth in my life. (264 words)

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