閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。    LongagoGodhadagreatman...

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閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。    LongagoGodhadagreatman...

閲讀下面的短文,然後按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

     Long ago God had a great many Burdens which he wished to have carried from one place to another on the earth, so he asked the animals to lend a hand. But all of them began to make excuses for not helping: the elephant was too dignified; the lion, too proud; and so on. Finally the birds came to God and said, “If you will tie the burdens into small bundles, we’ll be glad to carry them for you. We are small but we would like to help.” So God fastened upon the back of each one a small bundle, and they all set out walking across the plain to their destination. They sang as they went, and did not seem to feel the weight of their burdens at all. Every day the burdens seemed lighter and lighter until the loads seems to be lifting the birds, instead of the birds carrying the burdens. When they arrived at their destination, they discovered that when they removed their loads, there were wings in their place. It was the wings that enabled them to fly to the sky.

【寫作內容】

1. 以約30詞左右概括短文的主要內容;

2. 然後以約120詞就“Burdens Give Us Wings”這個主題寫一篇短文,包括如下要點:

(1)你在生活中或學習上有什麼負擔?你怎樣看待它們?

(2)你認為怎樣做可以將負擔變成翅膀。

【寫作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閲讀材料的內容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。

【評分標準】

概括準確,語言規範,內容合適,語篇連貫。

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【回答】

One possible version:

 Burdens Give Us Wings

The legend states that unlike other animals, the birds volunteered to help God carry the burdens to the destination merrily. Unexpectedly, wings replaced the loads afterwards, which enabled the birds to fly.

It’s true that everyone, willingly or unwillingly, carries burdens of this or that kind, and I am no exception. I am burdened with endless homework, unsatisfactory performance, and sometimes disagreements with my family. But as I always focus on the sunny side of life, I see these inevitable burdens as opportunities to learn more knowledge, gain more experience and thus grow more and more mature.

From my own perspective, taking advantage of the burdens properly, we can turn them into wings that help us fly closer and closer to our goals. For one thing, we should treat various burdens differently, only taking seriously those worth struggling for and letting go of the unimportant and unnecessary. For another, once we decide on a worthwhile goal, we should keep the faith that as long as we shoulder any loads with a light heart, we will make it eventually.

In a word, burdens can give us wings if we treat them properly.

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