閲讀下面短文,根據所給情節進行續寫兩段,使之構成一個完整的故事。Once,whenIwasateenager,...

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閲讀下面短文,根據所給情節進行續寫兩段,使之構成一個完整的故事。

Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus(馬戲團). Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.

This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money.

Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.

One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight in shining armor.”

He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.” The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight children’s tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”

The ticket lady gave the price. The man’s wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say?”

The ticket lady again gave the price. The man didn’t have enough money.

How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn’t have enough money to take them to the circus?

Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them.

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1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;

2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;

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Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________​

【回答】

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Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said, “Excuse me,sir. This fell out of your pocket.” The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on. He looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lips shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “ Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.”

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That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. We didn’t go to the circus that night. When I asked Dad why he did so, Dad said, “My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn’t begging for a handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young.” He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory. “We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others. We didn’t go to the circus tonight, but we didn’t go without.” 

解析：寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟:

1. 認真審題,找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.

2. 依據關鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡

3. 準確定位人稱、時態.注意使用高級詞彙和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.

4.最後還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等

高分句型一:The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on.

本句是what引導的賓語從句

意為:那個人轉過身來,看到了錢.他知道發生了什麼.

高分句型二:Surely he wasn't begging for a handout but he reminded me of my father when I was young.

本句是when引導的時間狀語從句;

意為:他當然沒有乞求施捨,但他讓我想起了我年輕時的父親.

知識點：提綱作文

題型：書面表達