假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文*有l0處語言錯誤，每句中最多...

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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文*有l0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I couldn't believe my ears when I heard my name calling．I was chosen to play the leading role in the play, that was my dream． As a shy and thin girl, I used to be quite afraid of speaking in the public． But my parents and teachers always encourage me to do so． Now I have changed great．In class, I am often the first one to stand up and answer questions even if I may take some mistakes． No pains, no gains, Now I am always brave enough overcome the difficulty in my heart and have changed in a lively girl． So my experience shows that we should not be afraid of losing face but only in this way can we make progresses．

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