假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處...

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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處...

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改.

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),並在其下面寫出該加的詞.

刪除:把多餘的詞用斜線(/)劃掉.

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞.

注意:每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞;只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分.

As you know it,food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even cause social unrest in some areas.But who is responsible for the current world food crisis?First,annual world grain output has declined because climate change.Then lots of farmland have been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization.Then how should we do to deal with the problem?On one hand,we should focus on the environmental protection or improve the ecology.On other hand,strict measures should be taking to protect farmland.And for the moment,I think,we should study hardly to develop sciences and solve the food shortage in the future.

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As you know it,food shortages have hit many countries in the

world and even cause social unrest in some areas.But who is

responsible for the current world food crisis?First,annual

world grain output has declined because∧climate change.Then

lots of farmland have been lost due to the rapid development of

 industry and urbanization.Then how should we do to deal with

the problem?On one hand,we should focus on the environmental

protection or improve the ecology.On∧other hand,strict measures

should be taking to protect farmland.And for the moment,I think,

we should study hardly to develop sciences and solve the food shortage

in the future.

1.去掉it   考查固定表達    As you know意為:正如你所知道的;故去掉it.

2.cause改成caused   考查連詞and的用法    本句是由and連接的具有同一個主語food shortages 的兩個句子,因此and前後的兩個謂語動詞在形式上應保持一致,而後面句子可以省略主語food shortages 以及助動詞have;故用caused.

3.在because後加 of   考查連詞because與複合介詞because of的區別     because是連詞,其後接原因狀語從句或回答以why開頭的問句; 而because of是複合介詞,其後接名詞、代詞或動名詞,或者what引導的名詞*從句;此處之後為:名詞短語climate change;故在because後加 of.

4.have改成has    考查主謂一致    由於此處的主語lots of farmland 為不可數名詞,故謂語動詞應使用第三人稱單數形式;故用has.

5.how改成what   考查句意理解以及特殊疑問詞   本句的意思是:那麼我們該怎麼處理這個問題呢?疑問副詞how在句中作狀語,疑問代詞what在句中作主語,賓語,表語或定語;由於此處在句中作賓語,而不是狀語;故用what.

6.or 改成 and   考查句意理解以及連詞    本句的意思是:我們應將重點放在環境保護以及改善生態環境上;此處表示並列,而非選擇關係;故用and.

7.other之前加the   考查固定搭配   on one hand…,on the other hand…意為:一方面…,另一方面…;故在other之前加the.  

8.taking改成taken   考查情態動詞的被動語態     本句中的主語strict measures 與動詞take構成被動關係,故此處應使用情態動詞should的被動語態形式;故用taken.

9.hardly改成hard   考查副詞詞義辨析   hardly意為:幾乎不,簡直不;hard意為:努力地;此處指的是:努力學習;故用hard.

10.sciences改成science   考查不可數名詞   由於science是不可數名詞,其後不能加s,故用science.

知識點:其他

題型:短文改錯

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