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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．作文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏子符號（∧）並在其下面寫出該加的詞．

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（）劃掉．

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞．

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．

Dear sir，

I'm Li Hua，a middle school student from China．I'll graduate from high school in this year but I'm planning to apply for The Summer Session 2016．Now，I'm writing to inquire about several questions concerning．To start with，I'd like to get some details of the course arrangement．How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will you cover？Additionally，I wonder if all the students lived on campus or we shall rent houses in advance．My utmost concern is see whether I'll have time to visit some places of interests in America on weekends．I'd be greatly grateful that you could furnish me with a relevant material regarding the above aspects．Your prompt and favorable reply would be high appreciated．

Yours，

Li Hua．

【回答】

Dear sir，

subjects will you cover？Additionally，I wonder if all the students lived on campus or we shall rent houses in advance．My utmost concern is∧see whether I'll have time to visit some places of interests in America on weekends．I'd be greatly grateful that you could furnish me with a relevant material regarding the above aspects．

Your prompt and favorable reply would be high appreciated．

Yours，

Li Hua

1．in去掉；介詞錯誤．this，next連接的時間狀語，通常不用介詞．

2．but改為and；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是承接，不是轉折．

3．concerning改為concerned；分詞錯誤．句中concern作questions的後置定語，concern與questions之間構成動賓關係，要用過去分詞．

4．you改為it；代詞錯誤．句意指代的是前面的arrangement，要用it來指代．

5．lived改為live；時態錯誤．文章講述的一般情況，要用一般現在時態．

6．加to；非謂語動詞錯誤．句中see作系動詞的表語，要用動詞不定式來表示．

7．interests改為interest；短語搭配錯誤．places of interest風景名勝．

8．that改為if；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是條件．

9．a改為the；冠詞錯誤．句意表達的是特指，意思是相關材料．