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假定英文課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多餘的詞用（）劃掉。

修改：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

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I'd like to talking about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Australia I had three      

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years before with my dance group to participate in/ international dance festival. It was the first

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time I had travelled by plane in my life. My mum worried a lot, so everything went smoothly. I

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stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life. Besides our performances there,

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we    have much excitement. We spent on      almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach

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and swam in the blue sea. But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all. It was a

swimming warm      what

time of joy，lights, music and summer parties.

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