假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多...

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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞．

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞．

注意：1．每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．

One day，on her way to school，Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station．He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside．From the calling card，she discover the owner's address and his telephone number．She thought the owner must very worried．So she went to the public telephones and called the owner．Then she waited at the bus station．The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan，but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school．

【回答】

One day，on her way to school，Li Lan found the small bag near the bus station．He opened it and found a lot of money as soon as a calling card inside．From the calling card，she discover the owner's address and his telephone number．She thought the owner must ∧ very worried．So she went to the public telephones and called the owner．Then she waited at the bus station．The owner came by taxi very soon，but Li Lan gave the bag to him．The owner is so grateful to her that he took out from 100yuan to reward Li Lan，but Li Lan polite refused it and went on to school．

詳解：

1．the改為a；冠詞錯誤．句意表達的是泛指，要用不定冠詞．

2．He改為She；邏輯指代錯誤．句意指代的是女*．

3．soon改為well；短語搭配錯誤．as well as和．

4．discover改為discovered；時態錯誤．文章講述的是過去發生的事情，要用一般過去時態．

5．加be；句子結構錯誤．句中must後要接動詞原形，be worried擔心．

6．telephones改為telephone；名詞錯誤．句意表達的是單數．

7．but改為and/so；連詞錯誤．句意表達的是承接，不是轉折．

8．is改為was；時態錯誤．文章講述的是過去的事情，要用一般過去時態．

9．from去掉；動詞搭配錯誤．take out拿出，後接賓語，不需要再加介詞．

10．polite改為politely；副詞錯誤．句中polite修飾動詞refused，要用副詞．

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