假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文.請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中10多...

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   假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文.請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中10多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

    增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),並在其下面寫出該加的詞。

    刪除:把多餘的詞用斜線()劃掉。

    修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

    注意:1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

         2、只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

     As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings,having   meals or waiting for buses,you can always find them addicting to their phones r complete ignoring others.

     This was really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is because smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat. However, too many exposure to phones is bad for people in terms of healthy. Moreover, people engaged in phones failing to communicate well with those around them.

    As far as I concerned, people should us« phones lo help with my work and study and care more about their family and friends ruther than mobile phones.

【回答】

  假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文.請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤,每句中10多...As is often the case, when people are attending to meetings, having meals or waiting for

buses, you can always find them addicting to their phones, complete ignoring others.

                           addicted              completely

This was really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is because smart phones

    is                                                that

nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends

through QQ and WeChat. However, too many exposure to phones is bad for people in terms

                                 much

of healthy. Moreover, people engaged in phones failing to communicate well with those

  health                                 fail

around them.

As far as I ∧ concerned, people should use phones to help with my work and study and care

        am                                         their

more about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

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題型:短文改錯

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