假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯誤。每句中至多有兩處錯...

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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯誤。每句中至多有兩處錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏符號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，並在該下面寫出修改後的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

John, a heavy smoker, once feel bad-tempered. His hands started shaking and he coughed a lot, so he turned to his doctor for help. “Quit smoking,” the doctor advised. Find the advice sensible from several points, such as money, healthy, and cleanliness, John decided to give up smoking. However, for several hour without a cigarette, John was nervous and had a difficulty in concentrating, inability to sleep, what made him more hungry for a cigarette. He said to himself, “One more, I will quit it tomorrow. Tomorrow will be a suitable day of me to break away from the bad habit…” Then he picked up a cigarette which made her relaxed. Again and again John made up his mind to do it “tomorrow”. Today John is still addicted for smoking.

【回答】

1. feel改為felt  

2. Find改為Finding  

3. healthy改為 health  

4. hour改為hours

5. have a difficulty的a去掉  

6. what改為which 

7. (加and)I will quit it tomorrow. 

8. of改為for

9. her改為him  

10. for改為to

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯