請修改以下作文，短文共10處錯誤，每句最多有兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個...

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請修改以下作文，短文共10處錯誤，每句最多有兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），並在其下面寫出改加的詞。

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Nowadays more and more people would rather to look for a job on the Internet than in the job market. There are many reasons for my preference, one of which is that a job hunter can find job conveniently. He needn’t bother to get recommendations from friend. Besides, a job hunter can get one by simple sending resumes by e-mail but the success rate is very high. Even if one failed to make it, he won’t feel embarrassing.

I believe job-hunting on the internet will win favor in more and more jobless people for its convenient, efficiency and success rate.

【回答】

1.去掉to look for中的to

---their

∧ job加a/his

nd--- friends

le--- simply

--- and

ed --- fails

rrassing--- embarrassed

--- with/among

enient--- convenience