書面表達每個人的成長都是一種蜕變的過程，從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功,請你回憶一下你在成長過程中所經歷的一次...

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每個人的成長都是一種蜕變的過程，從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功,請你回憶一下你在成長過程中所經歷的一次蜕變，把它寫出來與我們一起分享，好嗎？要求短文內容包含以下信息：1.變化前後分別是什麼樣子的？

                    2.促成你轉變的主要原因是什麼？

                    3.你為此變化而付出了怎樣的努力？

4.談談你變化後的感受。

提示：1.字數要求在80-100詞左右

2.短文中不能出現真實姓名和校名等信息

3.開頭已給出不計入總數。

                             makes me change 

     I used to be                                            

【回答】

My mother’s diary makes me change

I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, it is because of my mother’s diaries.

  One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was curious and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries. Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I also try to understand my mother’s feelings.

I feel very proud of myself whenever I see the smile on my mother’s face.

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