運動塑造健康,團結凝聚力量。5月10日,學校舉辦了春季運動會。你和班上的許多同學參加了比賽項目,戰績顯著。其他...

來源:國語幫 3.18W

問題詳情:

運動塑造健康,團結凝聚力量。5月10 日,學校舉辦了春季運動會。你和班上的許多同學參加了比賽項目,戰績顯著。其他同學觀看了比賽,併為選手們加油喝*。請你根據下面四幅圖片的提示,寫一篇日記,介紹運動會概況及班上同學參加的情況,並抒發自己的活動感受。

運動塑造健康,團結凝聚力量。5月10日,學校舉辦了春季運動會。你和班上的許多同學參加了比賽項目,戰績顯著。其他...

寫作要求:

1.文章中勿出現真實的姓名和校名;

2.文章須包含圖片所提供的主要信息,可適當發揮。行文連貫,條理清晰;

3.詞數80~100個,文章的開頭已經給出,不計入總字數。

參考詞彙:teamwork

  Friday, May 11th, 2019                                              Sunny

       It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

例文

Friday. May 1lth,2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.

Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet,  know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.

Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.

【解析】

   這是一篇看圖作文,根據圖片中的相關內容介紹一下運動會概況及班上同學參加的情況,並抒發自己的活動感受。所提供的卡片中列舉了跳遠、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要從同學們的參加情況和自己的活動感受這個方面去寫。時態為一般過去時,人稱為第一人稱。注意日記中必須包含圖片上的所有信息,並適當發揮。寫作時,避免使用漢語式的英語,儘量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確,表達要符合英語習慣,注意時態、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞,注意上下文聯繫緊密,符合邏輯關係,表達具有條理*。

【高分句型一】

Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我們班的每個人都很興奮,因為我們取得了一個很好的成績。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引導的原因狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同學袁穎和方丹輕鬆地獲得了女子跳遠和跳高的冠*。我也參加了男子100米賽跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒裝句。

知識點:其他

題型:書面表達

相關文章
熱門標籤