深圳市正在爭創全國文明城市、假定你是鵬城中學學生會主席，希望同學們為"創文'做出自己的貢獻。請你按照所提示的要...

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深圳市正在爭創全國文明城市、假定你是鵬城中學學生會主席，希望同學們為"創文'做出自己的貢獻。請你按照所提示的要點，代表學生會寫一篇倡議書。

要求：

詞數80左右(開頭和結尾已經給出,不計入總詞數)；

要點齊全，可適當發揮；

條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規範；

文中不得出現真實姓名和校名。

參考詞彙：分類 sort out    志願者volunteer     貢獻 contribution

Dear friends,

As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.

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All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.

The Student Union

July 20, 2020

【回答】

Dear friends,

As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出話題)

It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡議緣由)

Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具體介紹如何做)

I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望)

All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(號召)

The Student Union

July 20, 2020

【解析】

1.題幹解讀：該題目屬於倡議書寫作。在寫作時應承接短文開頭；第一段引出話題；第二段寫倡議緣由；第三段具體介紹如何做；第四段進行展望；第五段號召大家行動起來。

2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一人稱來進行寫作；時態採用一般現在時為主，寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。

知識點：名詞*從句

題型：作文