改錯：(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦廠中學東城校區高三模擬)Sunny31st,JulyItwassunnyto...

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改錯：(2020·安徽省六安市毛坦廠中學東城校區高三模擬)

Sunny 31st, July

It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon. While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.

Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.

【回答】

【解析】→and　考查連詞。學習和城市生活的喧囂是並列關係，故將or改為and。

→came　考查動詞的時態。根據第一句可知，描述過去發生的事情，用一般過去時。故將come改為came。

xing→relaxed　考查形容詞。根據語境可知，此處指“我”要放鬆。故將relaxing改為relaxed。

e→When　考查狀語從句的連接詞。while “當……的時候”，相當於during the time that，引導時間狀語從句，後面常跟時間段，when “當……的時候”，引導時間狀語從句，既可跟時間點也可跟時間段。故將While改為When。

→my　考查代詞。句意：當我到達公園，進入我視野的是茂盛的綠樹。此處表示“我的視野”，故將its改為my。

ses→grass　考查名詞。grass指“草坪”時，是不可數名詞。故將grasses改為grass。

→at　考查介詞。at ease “安逸，舒適”是固定搭配，故將with改為at。

efore→However　考查副詞。上文闡述“我”在生態公園裏，躺在長滿鮮花的草坪上，感到舒適。下文闡述時間過得很快，我必須回家了，前後之間是轉折關係，故將Therefore改為However。

9.去掉back　考查動詞。return表示“返回”，back是重複表達，故去掉back。

ntic前加a　考查冠詞。experience表示“經歷”時，是可數名詞，此處泛指“一次經歷”；such＋a/an＋adj.＋n. (單數)是常用搭配。故在romantic前加a。

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題型：短文改錯