假如你是李華，橙子輔導準備組織你校學生出國參加英語夏令營（EnglishSummerCamp），請寫一封申請信...

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假如你是李華，橙子輔導準備組織你校學生出國參加英語夏令營（English Summer Camp），請寫一封申請信給該培訓中心。信的內容必須包括：

1. 申請報名。

2. 為什麼想參加這個活動。

3. 對這項活動有怎樣的打算和期待。

注意：1.詞數100左右。

2. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture. I am writing to apply for the English Summer Camp.

There are some reasons for my taking part in this activity. For one thing, having a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books, I am crazy about the country’s culture as well as scenery. For another, I personally prefer British English, so while traveling there, I will have a chance to communicate with local people.

As is known to all, English is playing an important role in international society. I expect to have a better understanding of English culture by visiting places of interest. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【分析】

本篇書面表達是一封書信。假如你是李華，橙子輔導準備組織你校學生出國參加英語夏令營（English Summer Camp），請寫一封申請信給該培訓中心。

【詳解】

這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，不能遺漏要點：1. 申請報名；2. 為什麼想參加這個活動；3. 對這項活動有怎樣的打算和期待。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關係，儘量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞彙和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

根據寫作要點我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞彙和短語有：English Summer Camp，help us improve English，learn more about English culture，be writing to，apply for，take part in this activity，have a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books，be crazy about the country’s culture，prefer British English，have a chance to communicate with local people，As is known to all，play an important role in international society，have a better understanding of English culture，visit places of interest，take …into consideration。可以使用的銜接詞：1.表文章結構順序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表並列補充關係：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通過詞彙鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之後要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語法錯誤。

【點睛】

範文內容完整，要點全面，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關係。作者在範文中使用了主從複合句：I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture. 這句話運用了that引導的賓語從句；As is known to all, English is playing an important role in international society. 這句話運用了as引導的非限制*定語從句；I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.這句話運用了if 引導的賓語從句，it是形式賓語。使用了一些固定詞組，如：be writing to，apply for，take part in，be crazy about，play an important role in，have a better understanding of，places of interest，take …into consideration。全文中沒有*式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉換自然，為文章增*添*。

知識點：其他

題型：作文