改錯:Onemonthbefore,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationarou...

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改錯:One month before, with the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirit because of my poor performance. When I was at the loss and on the point of giving up, my head teacher comforted me and discuss with me the reasons for my failure in the exam. More unforgettable, he managed to help me with my study and inspired us. Determined to live up the expectations of my teachers and my parents, I devoted myself to solve all the problems in my study and then made progress. I'm more than grateful for that he has done for me. I've got to know it is never too much late to get back when there is still hope.

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改錯:Onemonthbefore,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationarou...

【解析】re→ago 考查副詞。根據語境可知,在考試前的一個月,由於高考臨近,作者緊張、焦慮。表示從事情發生到現在時間過去了一個月,應用ago,而不能用before。

it→spirits 考查名詞。in low spirits “情緒低落”,為固定短語。

→a 考查固定搭配。at a loss “不知所措”,不用the。

uss→discussed 考查動詞的時態。此句中and連接兩個並列謂語,即comforted和discussed,所以discuss用過去時。

rgettable→unforgettably 考查副詞。此處修飾整個句子,而unforgettable “令人難忘的”是形容詞,所以要改為副詞unforgettably。

→me 考查代詞。由上下文語境知此處要表達他幫助“我”,鼓勵“我”,而不是“我們”,故將us改為me。

後加to 考查固定短語。根據語境可知,是為了不辜負老師們的期望,live up to the expectations of sb.為固定短語,意為“不辜負某人的期望”。

e→solving 考查非謂語動詞。devote ... to “致力於,專心於”,to為介詞,後面要接動名詞或名詞。

→what或that前加all 考查賓語從句。根據語境可知,“我”感激他為“我”做的一切。for為介詞,後為賓語從句,從句缺賓語,所以用what或that前加all。

10.刪除much 考查副詞。never too late to get back意為“(只要有希望,)再晚回頭也不晚”。故刪除much。

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題型:短文改錯

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