假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处错误,每句中最多有两处错误...

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处错误,每句中最多有两处错误...

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处错误,每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

          2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua. I am a student of Class l, Grade 3.I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcer, so I’m writing to introduce me.

First of all, I am great interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hope that I can work as an announcer for the future. Now l would like to put that I have learned into a practice and gain some experience. Beside , I am good at English, especially spoken English. I win first prize in the English Speech Competition Last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance work for the school radio station.

I am Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours, Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua. I am a student of Class l, Grade 3.I have read the notice that our school radio station needs two English announcer, so I’m writing to introduce me.

      announcers                       myself

First of all, I am great interested in broadcasting. I have received some professional training in my spare time,

             greatly

hope that I can work as an announcer for the future. Now l would like to put that I have learned into a practice

hoping                         in                              what              去掉

and gain some experience. Beside , I am good at English, especially spoken English. I win first prize in the

                      Besides                                         won

English Speech Competition Last year. So I think I am highly qualified for the job. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance∧ work for the school radio station.

                 to

I am Looking forward to your early reply.                                                                                Yours,

Li Hua

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