假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯誤，倍感懊惱，寫了一封郵件向你訴説，為幫助他排解困感，...
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假定你是蘇華，最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯誤，倍感懊惱，寫了一封郵件向你訴説，為幫助他排解困感，請你根據他的郵件內容並結合自身經歷．用英語回信開導他。
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Subjects： Learning from mistakes |
Dear Su Hue, I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me? Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes? Can you tell me one of your mistakes? How did you deal with your problem? What have you learned from the mistake? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Nathan |
注意：
l.詞數90左右。開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞量；
2．回覆須包括所有要點，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順；
3．文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. ______________________________
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes
Su Hua
【回答】
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【解析】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增*不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等複雜從句結構的運用，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯*，也更富有條理。
【點睛】
書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發揮的作文。它要求將所規定的材料內容經整理後展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要儘量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，儘可能使用高級詞彙和較複雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數。
知識點：方法與哲理
題型：作文
