假如你是光明中學高二學生李華,你校學生會文學部（LiteratureDepartment）打算招聘一名英文編輯...

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假如你是光明中學高二學生李華, 你校學生會文學部（Literature Department）打算招聘一名英文編輯, 請你根據以下要點用英語給文學部負責人Lucy Wu寫一封詞數100左右的自薦信。

要點：1.寫信目的；

2.個人基本信息；

3.自薦理由（至少三點）。

Dear Lucy,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Lucy,

I am writing this letter to apply for the position of English editor in your Literature Department.

My name is Li Hua, a student of Senior Grade Two, Guangming Middle School.

I recommend myself as a qualified English editor for the following reasons. Firstly, interested in literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature works and have a good knowledge of literature.

Besides, English writing is my strong point. I have participated in many English writing competitions and won several prizes. Most importantly, as a cooperative, careful and devoted student, I am confident that I am able to do the job well. I am anxious for the position. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【分析】

這是一篇應用文，要求寫一封自薦信。

【詳解】

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，1.寫信目的；2.個人基本信息；3.自薦理由（至少三點）。第二，人稱為第一人稱。第三，時態以一般現在時為主，兼用現在完成時。

第二步：佈局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數量。這篇寫作段落數量為三段。第一段，寫信目的。第二段，個人基本信息。第三段，自薦理由（至少三點）。

第三步：確定關鍵詞彙和短語:，recommend，qualified，participate，anxious，literature，novels, poetry ，cooperative, careful and devoted ，English writing，literature works，a couple of，apply for，have a good knowledge of ，be able to do sth ,look forward to ，English editor。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子:形容詞短語interested in literature作狀語Firstly, interested in literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature works and have a good knowledge of literature. that 引導的賓語從句Most importantly, as a cooperative, careful and devoted student, I am confident that I am able to do the job well。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連接詞進行過渡銜接:firstly，besides，most importantly。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。

【點睛】

文章思路清晰，語言規範，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式：形容詞短語interested in literature作狀語Firstly, interested in literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature works and have a good knowledge of literature. that 引導的賓語從句Most importantly, as a cooperative, careful and devoted student, I am confident that I am able to do the job well。

高級句式的應用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達能力。

知識點：個人情況

題型：作文