DearMike,YousaidyouwanttoknowalotmuchabouttheEnglishClu...
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Dear Mike,
You said you want to know a lot much about the English Club of our school. It was three years ago when the English Club was born. It was found to improve students’ interest in English. Those interested in English got together in the multi-media classroom every Saturday afternoon. There are many activities holding in it. Students can watch diversely English films. They can as well as learn to sing English songs, which can help them learn English word by heart. In addition, many topics can be discussed there in a language. How do you like our club? I’m looking forward to early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Mike,
You said you want to know a lot about the English Club of our school. It was three years ago the English Club was born. It was to improve students’ interest in English. Those interested in English together in the multi-media classroom every Saturday afternoon. There are many activities in it. Students can watch English films. They can as well as learn to sing English songs, which can help them learn English by heart. In addition, many topics can be discussed there in language. How do you like our club? I’m looking forward to early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一處:much →more。你説你想了解更多關於我們學校的英語俱樂部的情況。a lot more"更多"是常用的表達,不能用much。
第二處:when →that。英語俱樂部誕生於三年前。本句是強調句型,基本結構是It is/was... that...,故不能把that換成when。
第三處:found →founded。建立這個俱樂部是為了提高學生對英語的興趣。動詞found是"建立"的意思,它的過去分詞形式是founded。而過去分詞found的原形是動詞find"發現,找到"。
第四處:got →get。雖然前面兩句用了一般過去時,但那是在講述俱樂部的建立,根據"every Saturday afternoon"可知,這裏説的是現在的一般情況,故要用一般現在時。
第五處:holding →held。在這裏舉辦很多活動。分析句子結構可知,activities後面是非謂語動詞短語作定語,activities與hold之間是邏輯上的被動關係,故這裏應該用過去分詞。
第六處:diversely →diverse。學生能看各種各樣的英語電影。此處修飾English films,故要用形容詞。diverse意為"各種各樣的,不同的"。
第七處:去掉well後的as。as well as是連詞,連接並列的成分,as well充當副詞,意為"也",相當於too。根據語境,此處顯然不應該用as well as,而應該用as well。
第八處:word →words。他們還能學唱英文歌曲,這能幫助他們牢記英文單詞。word在此處作"單詞"講,是可數名詞,其前沒有冠詞、物主代詞等限定詞,故要用複數形式。
第九處:a →the。此外,可以在這裏用這種語言(即英語)討論很多話題。這處錯誤很不容易改出來,因為語境*很強。上下文都在説英語俱樂部的情況,那麼,在英語俱樂部裏討論話題,當然要用英語這種語言了,故這裏的language是特指,而不是泛指。
第十處:在early前加your。你認為我們的英語俱樂部怎麼樣?我期待你的儘早回覆。根據語境,這裏應是"你的儘早回覆",故要加上形容詞*物主代詞your以使語義更加明確。
知識點：其他
題型：短文改錯
