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為了弘揚中華傳統文化,你校即將舉行"中華傳統文化·大家談"的演講比賽,你打算參加比賽,請根據以下內容提示,寫一...

為了弘揚中華傳統文化,你校即將舉行"中華傳統文化·大家談"的演講比賽,你打算參加比賽,請根據以下內容提示,寫一篇演講稿,介紹廣州的傳統文化——逛花街。

時間

春節前夕

地點

各區不同,最傳統的是西湖路花市

活動

1. 賞花、買花

2. 吃傳統小吃

3. 觀賞傳統燈飾

感受

與家人朋友一起、增進感情

……(至少一點)

對傳統文化的看法

……(至少一點)

要求:1.詞數80字左右(開頭已給出,不計入詞數)

2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息,否則不予評分。

3.參考詞彙:燈籠lantern

Guangzhou is a beautiful city which is full of traditional culture. Visiting the Flower Market is one of the traditions in Guangzhou. Now let me introduce it to you. ______________________________________________

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【回答】

【參考範文】

Guangzhou is a beautiful city which is full of traditional culture. Visiting the Flower Market is one of the traditions in Guangzhou. Now let me introduce it to you.

People in Guangzhou like to visit the Flower Market before the Spring Festival. Different district has different places. The most famous Flower Market lies in Xihu Road. You can enjoy different kinds of flowers there. If you like, you can also buy some. Besides flowers, you will also taste a lot of traditional snacks. Along the street, you can also enjoy the beauty of different traditional lanterns and lights.

I like visiting the Flower Market because it is a good way for people to get together and communicate with each other. When you are there, you will have a strong feeling that the New Year is coming. China has much traditional culture. It’s our duty to spread/introduce our traditional culture to the world and let them learn more about China.

【名師點評】

1.題幹解讀:本題要求介紹廣州的傳統文化——逛花街,是表格式作文。作者開門見山點出話題Visiting the Flower Market is one of the traditions in Guangzhou;然後從時間、地點和活動三個方面介紹逛花街的傳統習俗;最後介紹自己的感受和對傳統文化的看法。

2.例文點評:這篇習作是"總分總"結構。用第二和第一人稱展開論述,時態是一般現在時;短文開篇點題,內容充實,銜接自然,結構完整,表達條理,是一篇優秀的習作。

3.高分亮點:

短語:full of, one of, different kinds of, like to do, Spring Festival, a lot of traditional snacks, get together, communicate with, each other, in a word, let sb. do sth.

句型:It’s our duty to spread/introduce our traditional culture to the world and let them learn more about China.(固定句型)

If you like, you can also buy some.(條件狀語從句)

I like visiting the Flower Market because it is a good way for people to get together and communicate with each other.(原因狀語從句)

When you are there, you will have a strong feeling that the New Year is coming.(複合時間狀語從句結構)

知識點:其他

題型:書面表達

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