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 Write a review（評論） of the following story in about 120 words． The review has to include the following points．（閲讀下面的故事，請根據下面的提示，寫出一篇約120詞的評論）．

（1）The title of your review．（你撰寫的評論的標題．）

（2）Your idea（s）， examples and the reason（s） for unhappiness and happiness in the story．（你歸納的關於故事中幸福和不幸福的觀點，舉例子並説明原因．）

（3）Your idea（s） of happiness， examples for happiness in your daily life．（歸納你在日常生活中關於幸福的觀點，並舉例説明．）

（4）Your conclusion about happiness．（關於幸福的結論．）

（5）The words you may use．（你可能用到的詞） be satisfied with（對……滿意） desire n．慾望 contentment 知足 the key（關鍵） to happiness．

A long time ago， in a rich and beautiful country， there lived an unhappy king． He slept badly and didn't feel like eating． He often cried for no reason． This made the queen and his people worried． So they called a doctor to examine him．But he found nothing wrong with his body．He said what the king needed was the shirt of a happy person to wear．That would make him happy．

The prime minister was called to the palace． But when they explained the king's situation to him， he said，"Although I have a lot of power， it doesn't make me happy． I'm always worried about losing my power．"

Then the king's banker came to say， I'm afraid I'm not happy either． I have a lot of wealth， but I'm always worried about losing money． Someone tries to steal my money． Next， the palace singer was called to say， "I'm famous but I'm not happy because I'm worried about being followed by others． I can't be free．"

Finally， the top general was told to go out to find a happy man． He searched and searched but couldn't find anyone． Everyone seemed to have their own problems， and no one was truly happy． Just as he wanted to give up． he saw a poor man on the street． He was eating with his hands and singing happily to himself． The general went to him and said，"What makes you so happy？ You have no power， money， or fame．" The man said，"I have everything I want． and I don't want what I can't have． So I'm happy， and my song comes from the happiness in my heart． ""Can you give your shirt to me， I need it， "said the general．"What shirt？ I don' t have any shirts．"answered the man．

【回答】

My Thoughts about Happiness

Power, wealth, and fame can't always make people happy. For example, the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.

What can always make me happy？Happiness is always in my heart and is easy to find if I pay more attention to what I have. For instance, enjoying the beautiful sunshine after a cloudy day, getting a glass of water from mother when I am studying, getting help from my friends when I am in trouble and so on. These are the moments when I am happy.

All in all, don't think about what you can't have. Contentment is the key to happiness.

【解析】這是一篇要求寫評論的文章，根據下面的故事中的相關信息寫出一篇約120詞的評論。所提供的材料中列舉了撰寫的評論的標題。主要從：（1）歸納的關於故事中幸福和不幸福的觀點，舉例子並説明原因。（2）歸納你在日常生活中關於幸福的觀點，並舉例説明；（3）關於幸福的結論。這幾個方面去介紹。時態為一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱。注意評論中必須包含材料上的故事情節，並適當發揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，儘量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯繫緊密，符合邏輯關係，表達具有條理*。

【高分句型一】

For example，the rich people were unhappy, because they are afraid of losing money, while the poor people was truly happy because he was satisfied with what he could have.例如，富人不快樂，因為他們害怕失去錢，而窮人真正快樂是因為他對自己所擁有的感到滿足。

句子because they are afraid of losing money是由because引導的原因狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

All in all, don’t think about what you can't have. 總之，不要想你不能擁有的東西。

句子what you can't have. 做think about的賓語。

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